Angel of Death

Hey Ash! I saw this and I couldn't resist! This was written really well and I can't wait to read more. I could really feel Michael's emotions and I feel ...

Ooh I love Fall Out Boy!! 1. Everything's Magic -Angels and Airwaves 2. August is Over -We the Kings 3. Your Song - Mayday Parade 4. Shiver - Motion City ...

4. Love is Simply not Enough I told myself that I was going to stick with The Jane Effect but it looks like I'm going to stick with If Love ...

Hey KJ, This was a really good paragraph. I really don't have anything to critique. It was flawless and the sex scene wasn't too graphic and I see what you ...

Hey there luccy!!! Here are some things that I liked... Rosaline and Jared are adorable together. I also like how both the couples are twins, it makes the story more ...

YAY!!! I was going to explode after chapter sixteen, especially since I didn't think you were going to post another chapter. I liked this wait...I loved it!! As you already ...

Thanks Luccy. This critique was really helpful and I don't mind if you're nit-picky. It just gives me something to think about. I owe you some critiques now that you ...

Hey KJ!! I've been waiting so long to read this. This was a good chapter, though it wasn't my favorite. It was intense and it took the story in another ...

This was beautifully written and I kinda envy you. I could never write something so short and sweet and flowing like this. It takes me pages and pages to write ...

I liked this song. I listen to a lot of pop and alternative, so I got that kinda sultry upbeat feel when I read it. The words flow nicely and ...

Its so beautiful? How did you make it? I like your title as well, its so short but then it sounds like the tip of a song or the edge ...

Ah, I can't believe no one critiqued this. It sounds good against Maroon 5, it was sweet and short and I liked it as well. ~Angie :D

I agree with Kitty, stories that involve a lot of research suck and they drain your time and then they make you start another novel and another and...OMG...I'm just glad ...

Thanks for the heads up! Castle and Lost kinda hit everything on the nose. Sorry I didn't get to read this right away, but anyways, all I'm going to say ...

I am back, my friend! This critique pretty much mirrors Ashley's. I liked this a lot, and I hope you continue this. Just add flashbacks of the dream or something ...